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Post by eirra on Nov 25, 2007 18:30:20 GMT -5
Kinda a poem about the Eon characters in general, mostly about how Eirra and Darius feel. It doesn't specifically state that it's about Eon.... but it is... so there xD
We Are the Freaks By Blake Williams
Isolation What a thought To feel nothing But a life distraught
While pariahs sing A melodic discord A song with agony In every cord
While we paste faux smiles On our face To slovenly mask Our cold disgrace
The glass inside Begins to break And we bleed a blood That makes us quake
We pretend to live When we are dead We think on words That can’t be said
Always visible But rarely seen Our eyes are sad But our claws are keen
A constant circle A maze with no end A threat, a fear To Hell decend
But as our despair Begins to peak We'll raise our voice: For we are the freaks
This poem is copywrited to Blake and all that shit, so don't be stealing it, or you will be attacked by rabid goats
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Post by night on Nov 26, 2007 0:51:06 GMT -5
wow that was very well written! I like it!
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Post by eirra on Nov 26, 2007 11:14:38 GMT -5
Thank yous, Night ^_^
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Post by animeg on Nov 26, 2007 14:54:37 GMT -5
Wow! WHY DO YOU MAKE SUCH AWESOME POETRIES?? I MEAN SRSLY! xD This is very nicely written, Eirra, I love how you have your own style in your poems and it's always interesting to read.
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Post by eirra on Nov 26, 2007 17:20:06 GMT -5
Aw... thank you so much, Ani ^_^ I appreciate it <3
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Post by kaito on Nov 27, 2007 23:53:13 GMT -5
Not the goats!!! *shoots you for being too awsome* Why? Why are you so good at this? *huggles* awesome work!
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Post by eirra on Nov 28, 2007 11:04:19 GMT -5
Aw... thank you Kaito! ^_^ *hugs back*
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Post by Anon on Dec 16, 2007 23:49:38 GMT -5
Wow... I am speechless. Your poetry skills deserve so much praise, I can't even begin to comment on how amazing and deep this really is. I swear every poem from you that I read is better than the last; you've really got talent. Keep it going and don't ever stop. Wonderful job Eirra/Blake! *hugs*
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Post by eirra on Dec 20, 2007 10:14:10 GMT -5
Thank you very much, Tusami ^__^
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Post by bi on Dec 21, 2007 1:02:37 GMT -5
Whao...this is REALLY REALLY good! DDX I can't even come CLOSE to doing this kind of stuff! T_T Very well done, Eirra/Blake! I applaud for your awsome efforts!
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Post by eirra on Dec 21, 2007 14:15:44 GMT -5
Aw... thanks, Kama! ^_^
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Post by drakkensheild on Jun 7, 2008 2:36:05 GMT -5
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