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Post by eirra on Jul 22, 2007 14:20:43 GMT -5
Yes... I wrote Kama a poem!! YAY ^.^' Ok, I'm posting it here, because number 1: It's about Kama, an eon character, so I think it's appropriate. Yell at me if I'm wrong. And 2: I've been having issues with DA, so I don't know if i'l lbe able to post it or not in a place where you'd be able to read it, Kama... 0o So... Description:
Wolf of White
To: Kama Motive: Birthday poem
So I wrote this poem as a birthday gift for Kama, cause i missed her b-day (sorry, again :( ).
I used old English because it sounds fancier ^.^’ So… enjoy.
The character of Kama is (c) to: Kama, duh! And the poem is originally by me.
Wolf of white, wolf of white Where dost thou dwell this winter night? In a den with snow and chill? Near a fire that burns on still? Dost thou hunt for food and drink Or dost thou sit to rest and think?
Wolf that runs, wolf that runs Under many moons and suns What pursues thee with ill intent? Is it mortal or Satan sent? Soon you may stop to sleep and sigh Shelter and safety will soon by nigh
Wolf with wings, wolf with wings Can thy hear the wind that sings? Its song of danger and dismay Will keep thy hunters far at bay So thee may safely slumber long Deadly demons can deal thee no wrong Wolf that sleeps, wolf that sleeps May thy goddess thy soul keep It’s hours and hours before thee must wake Time slows for the weary wolf’s sake So thee, white wolf, can rest tonight Sleeping in snow, angelic and white
-From: Eirra D.
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Post by bi on Jul 23, 2007 0:54:06 GMT -5
Alrighties Eirra...one word...OMG! This poem make me happy! Especially at 12 am in the morning!!!! ^____________^ Gee...I didn't see this on DA sadly...>: But yaaaay!!! *teh glooomp!!!* Thank you Eirra!
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Post by night on Jul 23, 2007 19:33:58 GMT -5
wow! once again you have managed to leave me pretty damn speechless! very well written and I agree that the old english is perfect!
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Post by animeg on Jul 25, 2007 2:41:44 GMT -5
You did post this on DA and I favorited it. 8) Mostly because I like your writing style; you are really talented with your words and should like, have your own poem book and sell it. o_o But anyway, this is a wonderful poem. I really liked how you started each stanza with 'Wolf'; it's really catchy. xD Keep it up Eirra, looking forward to more of your writings in the future. 8>
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Post by eirra on Jul 26, 2007 17:15:17 GMT -5
Alrighties Eirra...one word...OMG! This poem make me happy! Especially at 12 am in the morning!!!! ^____________^ Gee...I didn't see this on DA sadly...>: But yaaaay!!! *teh glooomp!!!* Thank you Eirra! *blink* Really. Huh... I thought I posted it. DA seems to be angry at me.... lol. Anyways, YAY!! I R GLAD U LYKE IT KAMA!!! XD
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Post by eirra on Jul 26, 2007 17:15:39 GMT -5
wow! once again you have managed to leave me pretty damn speechless! very well written and I agree that the old english is perfect! Thank you, Night! ^^ xD
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Post by eirra on Jul 26, 2007 17:16:57 GMT -5
You did post this on DA and I favorited it. 8) Mostly because I like your writing style; you are really talented with your words and should like, have your own poem book and sell it. o_o But anyway, this is a wonderful poem. I really liked how you started each stanza with 'Wolf'; it's really catchy. xD Keep it up Eirra, looking forward to more of your writings in the future. 8>
[/size] [/color][/quote] Nyar! Thanks, Ani! Yeah... I was thinking about putting all my poems into a book. Prob. is, a lot of them are meant to be songs. I guess I could learn to read notes and put the tune in the book as well.... Hm... ANYways, Thanks again, Ani!! ^^
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Post by Anon on Jul 28, 2007 18:02:33 GMT -5
Wow, that's really really good... like wow. I love it! When I go on DA later, I'll be sure to fav it. Geeze, you write WAY too good Eirra *envy envy* As always, keep it up. I can't think of anything else to say even though I want to! Weee! *is half awake in the middle of the day*
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Post by kaito on Aug 10, 2007 23:26:23 GMT -5
Damn. That's just..... words fail me at the moment. You could make a career doing this. That is like, the most well written poem I've ever read. *reads it again* I love poems in olde English. It gives it that ring.....
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Post by eirra on Aug 11, 2007 17:08:06 GMT -5
*SQUEE* THANK YOU GUYS!! xD *is happy* and again... *glomp*
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Post by drakkensheild on Jun 7, 2008 2:37:53 GMT -5
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