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Post by kaito on Apr 25, 2007 12:17:02 GMT -5
Great word choice Taro!!! ^^; These stories are too awesome for words..... Keep it up!! ^_____^ Omg, I can't stop reading them!!! And the part about Thad was teh awscomeness! Reminds me that I should be writting MY story pretty soon....
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Post by animeg on Apr 25, 2007 17:01:01 GMT -5
Wow, Taro, I love your stories!! Both Chapter One and Two, man, I can not say how much I envy your writing skills; seriously. I love how simple you keep your story, easy to read and like Kaito said, perfect word choices. Unlike me, who writes long story that are complex and detailed. BD BD BD BD
Buuuuut... only a sliiight error in your story. *HUGE SWEATDROP* Night never went to the school. ^_^;;; That, she and Ani met AFTER Ani escapes the school so.. yeah. Night was never there in the first place. >3> She was busy running away from Odin so she doesn't get killed! : D : D : D ... 8>
Either way, keep it up! <3333
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Post by animeg on Apr 25, 2007 17:52:30 GMT -5
Awawrr, sorry that you had to know NOW when you're in the middle of your story. ;; But if it's just a fanfic, then yeah, I'm sure Night doesn't mind it one bit!
But yeah, sorry. xD; But seeing how everybody has to split up after escaping would make it realistic, you know? That way the sciencist guys wouldn't capture them as a group and it'll be harder to catch each indivduals. And doing it this way makes it easier on the creators to write their own stories, however ways they want it! Or so that's how I heard it. ^^;
If you can fix it, that's great! But if you can't and really want Night in there, I dunno what Night says about it but I think it's fine by her too! All in all, I know I love your stories. : D
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Post by animeg on Apr 25, 2007 19:56:00 GMT -5
Lmfao, that was fun. I get to draw anthro Taro for the first time and he gets to make a weird face. <8U
He makes me happy. c:
But awawrrr, poor Taro-Taro! xD -huggles- You get some sleep tonight. >3>
Dude, put this up in the art section as well. >3> THE WHOLE ART WORLD MUST SEE?! BWAHAHAHAHA! ....uhhh.... OHLOOK! -points, then runs-
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Post by night on Apr 26, 2007 17:22:40 GMT -5
hmm actually now that I have had the time to read this, I would like to say....OMGTAROTHATISANAWSOMESTORY!!!!!!
and I have an idea for you! I was thinking that what if you were one of the first of our little group (besides camio) to get sent to the other side of the school? I mean..being that you have found out everything and all! and not only that, but speaking of camio, that part that you were saying about tusami attacking taro..what if it was camio? being that he is a shape shifter and after they experiment on him and what not, not only will he be able to transform into other people, but he'll be able to copy their attacks too!
...so..whatcha say?
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Post by bi on Apr 26, 2007 17:26:53 GMT -5
OMG Taro!!! 8DDD I LOVE it! ^_^ Though...Kama isn't THAT happy is what I have to suggest to you. Hmmm...*tries to click the buttons on the cellphone with her paws* ...D:
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Post by momaru on Apr 26, 2007 18:29:50 GMT -5
hehe doggy paws aren't good with cellphones! I learned my lesson: don't drink the juice!
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Post by animeg on Apr 26, 2007 21:22:43 GMT -5
-wriggles happily- Can't wait for Chapter Three! <3
-Night
Wow, that's pretty interesting but don't the sciencist have the power to brainwash their experiments? Besides, I'm sure Taro had a reason for Tusami, specifically, attacking and he DID carried her off after the fight so I dunno how Camio would fit. xD But I really gotta say it IS an interesting idea!..........Man, that would suck for Taro! xD xD
Taro: -shakes Tusami- Wake up! Wake up!! D: Tusami: -Changes into Camio- Wtf is your problem? Get off. DX Taro: O______________________O YOU'RE NOT TUSAMI!!!1! 'COS YOU'RE NOT A DRAGON AND AND -points to Camio's chest- YOU'RE NOT A GIRL. DDDDDD: Camio: Gee, you're a smart one, aren't you? BD
But yeah, that's a really interesting idea though and it'd add to the drama! : D
-Kama
xDD LUCKILY FOR EON ANI, SHE GOT HANDS NOW RATHER THEN PAWS! BD Eon Ani: Dude... fingers rocks. -dials cell phone-
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Post by night on Apr 26, 2007 21:54:13 GMT -5
xDD LUCKILY FOR EON ANI, SHE GOT HANDS NOW RATHER THEN PAWS! BD Eon Ani: Dude... fingers rocks. -dials cell phone-
[/size] [/color][/quote] Night: *picks up cell phone*............what the... ani: NIGHT? YOU THERE? Night: AHHHHH!!! *throws the phone* EVIL EVIL EVIL!!
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Post by animeg on Apr 26, 2007 22:01:57 GMT -5
Lmfao. Uh... good thing Ani can help Night and introduce her to the wonderous technology of our world! BD
Ani: NIGHT? HELLO? .... Huh, she must have have her cell phone off. ... Ohwell, I'll try again later!
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Post by night on Apr 26, 2007 22:09:47 GMT -5
Lmfao. Uh... good thing Ani can help Night and introduce her to the wonderous technology of our world! BD
Ani: NIGHT? HELLO? .... Huh, she must have have her cell phone off. ... Ohwell, I'll try again later! [/size] [/color][/quote] eah no kidding..cause god only knows someone is gonna have too...of course Amaya would probably be estatic! amaya: oh this is amazing! wonderous! whats it called!?? ani:....a cell phone? amaya: OMGTHATSSOFASCINATING!!! *starts to nose around it all happy like*
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Post by sorin on May 2, 2007 22:59:37 GMT -5
I love it so far. I am going to keep reading even though i hate to read. Realy it is that good! ^_^
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Post by drakkensheild on Jun 7, 2008 2:38:57 GMT -5
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